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H.M. Hershberger's avatar

Well, that ending was a sucker punch in the gut.

I'm guessing that the dragon isn't going to ally with Athyn either, but that it will accept her and Jaris as a pair. Which will be extremely awkward for them and amusing for us.

Also, I really love the worldbuilding here. The dragon speech is reminding me a bit of Toothless in the HTTYD books, though less sassy, and the concept of the breath layer is a unique twist I haven't seen before.

Keep up the good work!

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Jennifer's avatar

Oh my gosh.... I need to know what happens! This story is amazing already!

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